Although Ran laughs off the mix-up, Lacey and Rick can't stop thinking about the unexpected encounter, and they can't escape the scorching flashbacks it's aroused.
Ran doesn't want an innocent mistake to ruin his relationship with his girlfriend or his cousin, so he proposes a solution. He wants the three of them to solve this problem the old-fashioned way, by sleeping on it...together.
THE BEST MISTAKE
January 16, 2012
For all that this is a hot short story it has pretty vanilla sex and an unlikely premise. If you're going to present living in a menage, then at least some daring in the sack is in order. The guys don't do each other, and there's no DP. The premise of the menage starting―going from extreme embarrassment to a green light is pretty unlikely.
The characters are a lawyer, a Cardiology resident and a financial analyst. Yet the have time to restore an old house, have a party and shop all together for furniture. Oh, and have sex together.
One thing I liked was a character hesitating because the menage would be unconventional. I thought that was a pretty natural thing to think about.
I love the cover. Look, it's not a bad book, the writing is fine and well-balanced, but there's nothing truly distinguishing about it.
My question is whether you've ever had a fantasy come true? If so, don't tell me....PLEASE! But what I would like to know is which was better, the fantasy or the reality?
The Best Mistake is available from Amazon:
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17,000 words, Short Story